Night Mistress

hey, I must say Merry that this story is very interesting. I hope you do continue it and pm me when you post the next chapter up. the one thing ...

hey, your story caught my interesting when it said vampire. i am writing one too but it in the romance fiction. Now i do agree with Sakura that you don't ...

hey, I am so glad you decide to continue. I have to say that i like this part. This he going to be her new love interest? I can see ...

Here as promised. I read the another reviews and they seems to catch everything that i found wrong with it. It seems pretty good, even thought i am not a ...

Hey, Yes! she finally met Edward. I like it on how to describe this meeting between the two. So i am guessing that he comes into the family next or ...

Hey..... This piece was so much better than the last. I'm glad that persphone finally found happiness in hade and his world. He truly loves her and she truly love ...

Hey... to be quite honest with you, i found this part lacking the emotion that the other did. all of the character were beautiful, but they were lacking in some ...

oh, I love Persephone and Hades story. and your story just give the me the behind the scenes stuff. I love this part. I kind of feel thought because she ...

oops, I accidentally read the chapter one before this. This prologue wants me to read more(even though i have already read the other chapter). But i am getting confused. Who ...

hey, your story seems interesting enough for me to want to read more. Some of your grammar can be fixed when you re-read your way though it. And some of ...

Oh my god! I'm so nervous about posting this. I have about thirty pages more, but this is just the first part of the prologue. Prologue (edited) The summer night ...

hey, Your story seems pretty good and it's total different then what i excepted. So i am guess that Lady wolf is the woman that Trygg is in love with ...

Wow! this was sooo real for me! A girl trying to keep her innocence for what i guess is marriage, am i correct? it's so real because your MC shows ...

Umm...and so the plot thickens..... okay question: what happen to the parents? i think you need to explain what happen to them. Are they alive or what? So Emma is ...

Hey Merry, I saw that you had decide to post in this forum, when you usually post into the historical fiction. I do have to say that your story is ...